Friday, May 6, 2011

Capstone

Tuscaloosa is

wood smoke
                   billowing                                        direction;
                             out                       northeasterly
                                of                    in a
                                  barbeque joint
                                                           
houndstooth applied indiscriminately;

ruins;

our upstairs law student neighbor moaning and whining in pleasure
                                                            as her and her boyfriend with
                                                            the “Yes, yes, right there!”
                                                            the “ooohs”
                                                            it stops,
                                                            the quick footsteps to the bathroom;

intact;

the brick envelope of stale beer,
                                          the graffiti that reads, “The Paranoids are after me”;

debris;

sweat, metal bleachers, shakers,
                                                and fascination;

four seasons—not the regular variety: a spring, a concise Minnesota summer, a summer of oppression, and autumn;

a drive, a stadium, a dorm, a high school, a conference center—all Bryant;

a Baptist hangover;

magnolia lotus-like;

white pillars;

race and religion;

bourbon-coated eyes;

a professor explaining that if you’re going to study Aristotle, then you have to read Nichomachean Ethics—all stated in an accent New Orleanian;

two Shaggies in a 4 Runner sharing a Bob Marley joint at a stoplight and listening to 
Widespread
Panic;

Roll Tide as a general affirmation;

the safety of bathtubs and closets;

pine straw;

fun as sex on Sunday morning;

vowels that extend for a good while;

home.

4 comments:

Babe Runner said...

Ooh, I do like this lots. You poetic guy, you.

Quintilian B. Nasty said...

I don't know how good it is, but it was fun writing it. Might be able to expand it...

Sandy Longhorn said...

Loving this!

best lines:
brick envelope of stale beer
vowels that extend for a good while

Wonderful ode, my friend.

Quintilian B. Nasty said...

Thanks, Sandy.